Posted by ?? on December 09, 2002 at 11:05:07:
In Reply to: Disgruntled students = Empire Breakdown posted by FERAL EXPATRIATE on December 09, 2002 at 00:00:36:
Feral,
You're drammatic, aren't you. I'm not saying I disagree with you, but you write like a fantasy fiction author. I find it interesting, but somewhat difficult to read. Just as a constructive criticism, you may want to work on making your writing more concise and presentable. I mean you no offense by this criticism, I can see that you have good ideas, you just need to get them across more clearly.
Keep writing!